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THE CHARACTERS

 

Chapter Eight

16 Ways You Can Build a Better Hero

 

The audience rules

Shakespeare created many of the most memorable heroes in the English language. We acknowledge him as an artistic genius. But the Bard was also the most financially successful writer of his time. Even in modern times, tidy fortunes are made from retreading his work.

One of the keys to his extraordinary success is to be found in this trenchant and insightful quote from Dr. Samuel Johnson, who published a definitive edition of the plays in 1765:

The stage but echoes back the public voice.
The drama’s laws, the drama’s patrons give,
For we that live to please must please to live.

That one is worth pinning on your wall. It's as true for you as it was 400 years ago when Shakespeare was penning his audience-pleasing masterpieces. Writing stories that will satisfy the desires of your audience will lead directly to your success.

Moviegoers, like the Globe theatergoers in 1600, have definite and strong desires about what they want in a hero. And they vote with their feet and their wallets.

You will write better heroes and better screenplays if you use the audience's desires as your writing "laws."

What are those desires? And how can you tap into them? I'm going to suggest sixteen types of audience desires, both positive and negative, that may be helpful. I'll try to illustrate with examples what movie audiences want (or do not want) in their heroes, and what you can do about it:

 

The beginning state and condition of a typical movie hero

1. The audience wants the hero to be forced to struggle, change, and become a better, happier, and more successful person.

Professional screenwriters recognize this want and take ingenious steps to exploit it.

Have you ever noticed that heroes at the beginning of a movie are stuck in a rut?

They're usually in a state of paralysis (literal or figurative). They're often imprisoned in some way. In Gladiator, for example, Maximus (Russell Crowe) begins trapped in a miasma of political intrigue, and progresses to a literal state of imprisonment and despair.

By portraying this admirable hero so far from "happy and successful," the writers intensified the audience's desire to see him struggle toward justice and freedom.

Try to imagine how your Hero, at the beginning of your movie, could be in a state of paralysis, unable to act.

Perhaps she might be like Angela Bennett (Sandra Bullock) in
The Net. Angela, in retreat from a hurtful love affair, shrinks from human contact. She has woven a protective cocoon around herself and forged the bars of her own prison.

Then again, your Hero might be "imprisoned" like William Broyles Jr.'s hero Chuck Nolan (Tom Hanks) in Cast Away. Chuck is so obsessed by the deadline culture of his job that he has become a barely human automaton.

 

2. The audience wants the Hero to exhibit a sense of humor.

Very near the opening of your screenplay, try to find a way to demonstrate that your Hero possesses a sense of humor.

This is a simple but important desire to satisfy. You don't need a gag writer.

Audiences respond positively to self-deprecating or ironic humor. When Angela Bennett is accused of not being a risk-taker, she counters that she does take risks: she doesn't always floss, and she tears the labels off her mattresses.

Try to make your Hero exhibit a sense of humor as soon as possible.

 

The Hero's aspirations, beliefs, and values

3. The audience wants the Hero to have bigger-than-life dreams and desires.

Maximus dreams of winning his freedom as a gladiator, of bringing down the regime of the murderous usurper, Commodus, and freeing Rome. What dreams and desires (perhaps secret) can your Hero develop to satisfy this audience desire?

4. Moviegoers want the Hero to believe in (and act according to) the basic set of values that they believe in.

In Titanic Jack Dawson (Leonard DiCaprio) believes that a poor sincere artist should be true to his inner calling.

He believes in the value of life. He believes that true love should triumph over class barriers and financial considerations.

He believes in heroism to save a human life. These are all values that North American moviegoers believe in.

Dirty Harry believes that a cop should not follow regulations if it's a case of protecting the honest citizenry from the scum that infest the streets.

What are your Hero's values? Are those values shared by the majority of the audience? Take your best shot.


The Hero's motivation

5. The audience doesn’t want the Hero to be motivated by base selfish desires.

Audiences dislike base selfish desires like greed. They like admirable selfish desires like striving for achievement (to become a great opera star, or head of the company, or discoverer of Insulin).

They dislike base selfish desires like pure revenge. They like admirable selfish desires like wanting to redress an injustice that one has suffered.

They love admirable unselfish desires like wanting to redress an injustice others have suffered, so as to make the world a better place to live.

 

Caution: This does not mean that you never create heroes with base selfish motives.

 

A hero with base selfish motives is exactly what you want if your screenplay is intended to be:

      1. a Cautionary Tale (a story in which the Hero dies because of his or her base selfish motives), or

      2. a Redemption Story (one in which the Hero suffers and learns a life lesson so as to change and become a better person).

You can often create great tension and catharsis in an audience through heroes with base selfish motives. Three good examples from different eras: Macbeth, The Treasure of the Sierra Madre, Goodfellas, and My Best Friend’s Wedding

 
Studio Still....Columbia TriStar

Cameron Diaz (Opposing Force), Dermot Mulroney (Bonding Character) and Julia Roberts (Hero with base, selfish motives) in Karaoke bar where Hero tries to humiliate Opponent in order to make Bonding Character fall out of love with her.

Audiences want a Hero to be severely tested

6. The audience wants the Hero to struggle to overcome increasingly more difficult obstacles.

In Analyze This, written by Kenneth Lonergan (and others), Dr. Sobel (Billy Crystal) tries to get out of treating a depressed mob boss (Robert De Niro).

 
Studio Still Warner Brothers

Robert de Niro (Bonding Character) and Billy Crystal (Hero) having a "discussion." This picture has some clever twists on the Hero/Bonding Character model. Many of the hilarious outcomes stem from the Hero's desire to escape from his Bonding Character. Then the plot escalates when the Hero finds himself battling his patient's enemies.

At first, there are meetings in offices, and chases around a hotel, but the obstacles escalate, until Sobel finds himself pinned down by a hail of lead in a waterfront shoot-out.

Is your Hero's struggle escalating to the utmost level consistent with the premise?

7. The audience wants the Hero to take on an opponent who is more powerful and successful than the hero.

Erin Brockovich takes on the chemical company.

Jeffrey Wigand takes on the tobacco cartel (The Insider).

Angela Bennett (The Net) takes on the wealthy megalomaniac computer baron.

Chuck Noland takes on the ocean, and Luke Skywalker takes on the galactic forces of evil.

In Chapter 7, we talked about the nature of the Opposing/Attacking Force.

One of the Story Characteristics of this Force, be it human, animal, alien, or natural (such as the tornado in Twister) is that it has been gathering its forces, and carrying on its nefarious activities for a significant period of time prior to the opening of the story.

Consider Gladiator. For years the Opposing/Attacking Force, Commodus, has been building his alliances and plotting to take control of the Roman Empire. The reigning Emperor, Marcus Aurelius, has blocked his ambitions, at least until our story starts. At the beginning of the movie, Commodus murders Marcus Aurelius and tries to have the Hero (Maximus, played by Russell Crowe) executed.

The execution fails, but leaves the Hero friendless, penniless, and sold into slavery. Maximus and Commodus are thus locked into the central struggle of the movie, which will end in the death of at least one of them.

..Studio ..Still ...................................... .DreamWorks SKG./ Universal

. Villain (Joaquin Phoenix) confronts Hero (Russell Crowe)
. Note the power disparity as evidenced by the fact that
..the Hero is in chains.
...........
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At this point in the story, the power disparity between the Hero and the Villain is enormous. And the stage is set for a great audience-pleaser as Maximus takes on the seemingly impossible task of overcoming the tremendous odds against him.

The Prior Power Device

Gladiator exemplifies all the qualities of the Prior Power device, which is so vital to the success of any story:

    1. The Villain, very alike to the Hero in many ways, is more powerful than the Hero when the story starts.
    2. The Villain has been growing in power prior to the beginning of the Story.
    3. Up until shortly after the story begins, the Villain has been unaware that the Hero is an obstacle to him (in Gladiator Commodus learns that Maximus is favored by the Emperor, perhaps even so far as to be appointed to succeed him).

To build a really good story, you need to create a backstory that includes this Prior Power characteristic for the Opposing/Attacking Force.

 

Opponents and obstacles for Romantic Comedy and Person-in-Peril

Two genres of movies, at least, don't employ an antagonist or opponent in the typical sense.

The first of these two types is the Romantic Comedy.

In a Romantic Comedy the Opponent is the person whose love the hero needs to win.

 
Studio Still.....Columbia Pictures

Bonding Character/Opponent (Meg Ryan) gets ready to fake an orgasm in a restaurant, to prove to the Hero (Billy Crystal) that men never know when a woman is faking it.

As Good As It Gets, When Harry Met Sally, Pretty Woman, Bridges of Madison County ¾ in movies like these, the gulf between the hero and the loved one seems to be more powerful than the hero.

In addition to the resistance of the desired loved one, if you are writing a romantic comedy, you need to create as many situational obstacles as possible.

In Sleepless in Seattle, the dominant situational obstacle is geography. The romantic couple is separated by a whole continent. Without this situational obstacle, you don't have a story, you have a cliché.

One of the favorite situational obstacles is mistaken identity. This device is one that could use a whole chapter in itself. Story tellers have been using it for centuries.

The Sandra Bullock vehicle, While You Were Sleeping, utilizes a unique twist on this situational obstacle.

Bullock has gotten herself into a situation in which she's innocently led the family of an injured commuter (played by Peter Gallagher) to believe she's his fiancé, when in fact he's only a passing acquaintance.

Gallagher is in a coma, and she starts falling in love with his brother. As long as she maintains her masquerade, neither can gain the love of the other. It's a comedy, so the struggle leads to hilarious results.

What about the opponent for your Romantic Comedy Hero? Is he or she as daunting as you can imagine?

What about the Situational Obstacle? Is it as potent as the two above?

The second of the two genres that don't employ an antagonist or opponent in the typical sense is the Person-in-Peril.

In this genre, as in the Romantic Comedy, the Bonding Character is also the Opposing /Attacking Force, whose sole mission is to gain total control over, and ultimately destroy, the Hero.

Simplified, what you have is essentially a two-hander, in which the Bonding Character relentlessly pursues the Hero, who tries throughout most of the movie to escape.

Near the end, however, the Hero turns on the Villain and carries out a plan to destroy him, her, or it.

Typical examples of this genre are Alien, Marathon Man, The Net, and Sleeping With the Enemy.


It's a high-stakes game

8. Moviegoers want the hero to play for high stakes, some outcome, or ideal, or benefit that they believe is supremely important.

What's at stake in your Hero's struggle? Will your audience believe in its importance? Is it life or death? Is it the integrity of the community? Is it winning the only woman (or man) for the hero, as in a love story? Is it saving the nation, or the world, from disaster? Is it righting a monstrous injustice?

Some examples:

In The Net, Angela Bennet fights not only for her own life, but the safety and freedom of the nation, which is in danger of being controlled and manipulated by the megalomaniac computer baron.

In all of the Batman movies, Bruce Wayne fights for the safety of his community and its right to enjoy freedom from crime.

Melanie Griffith, as Tess in Working Girl struggles to rise from the secretarial pool to become an executive, and to win a life-partner worthy of her aspirations.

But she doesn't just struggle for her own selfish benefit, she represents the dreams of other women like her, and she' s also a champion of humanity and respect in the corporate workplace.

In Minority Report, John Anderton battles to uncover gross corruption in law enforcement, and subsequently to liberate certain special humans (the "pre-cogs") who are kept in a state of drug-induced coma to serve the purposes of the pre-crime unit.

Scratch any successful movie and you'll find high stakes for the Hero hidden just below the surface.

 

9. Moviegoers want the hero to be forced to undertake frightening and/or difficult tasks that they would not willingly undertake themselves.

Studio still Orion Pictures

Bonding Character Hannibal Lecter(Anthony Hopkins) and Hero Clarice Starling (Jodie Foster) in Silence of the Lambs. Visiting the notorious serial killer is scary, but not as scary as the tasks Agent Starling will face if she wants to catch the killer she's after.


This is the "Don't go down in the basement!" syndrome. Nobody in their right mind would go down in the basement after a serial killer the way Clarice Starling (Jodie Foster) does in Silence of the Lambs. But it's exactly what the audience wants her to do
¾ because she's the hero.

 

End-beats for the Hero

10. The audience wants to believe that the hero can win. They don’t want to be sure that the hero will win.

John Book (Harrison Ford), the hero of Witness faces three lethal armed killers who invade the Lapp farm. Book, although a trained police officer, has no weapons. The audience is on tenterhooks through the whole final sequence. They believe he can overcome the villains, but they have no idea how he will do it.

 

11. The audience wants the hero to face his or her worst fears.

In the final sequence of The Terminator, James Cameron's breakthrough movie, the hero, Sarah Connor (Linda Hamilton) faces the robotic relentless killing machine all alone. Her worst nightmare has become a reality. What is your Hero's deepest fear? Use it.

 

12. The audience wants the Hero to escape death (literal or figurative) by means of strength of character, persistence, cleverness and courage, not raw strength.

The quintessential example of a writer manipulating this audience desire occurs in William Goldman's Butch Cassidy and The Sundance Kid. The heroes find themselves trapped at the edge of a cliff, with the posse closing in. Instead of surrendering, they jump off the cliff into the river below and get away.

How many of these types of moments can you set up for your hero?

 

13. The audience wants the Hero to win the prize at the end of the movie.

At the end of Working Girl, Tess McGill (Melanie Griffith) wins her dream job and finds herself in the corner office. What's the prize for your Hero?

 

14. The audience does not want the Hero to be lucky, unless the luck is caused by the hero’s cunning or provident preparation.

In the final battle in Star Wars, it could be argued that Luke Skywalker "gets lucky" when he destroys the death star. In fact audiences readily accepted his good luck, because they had shared his hours of preparation with Obi Wan Kenobi.

 

15. The audience does not want the Hero to be able to quit, to abandon the task he or she has undertaken.

You need to create good reasons why your Hero cannot quit. In Robert Towne's superb detective story Chinatown, Jake (Jack Nicholson) cannot quit because he has a score to settle with the villain, and because he's fallen in love with Evelyn Mulwray (Faye Dunaway), whose husband was murdered.

 

16. The audience does not want to have its expectations fulfilled.

It wants to be surprised. So don't let your Hero do what the audience expects her to do. Write against the expectations of the audience, or have the expectation fulfilled but in a totally unexpected way.

Try to imagine all the ways in which you can satisfy the audience's desires and avoid (or manipulate) the audience's dislikes at every moment of your movie.

Try to put in as many audience-satisfying moments as possible. Put them in on top of each other if you can.

As you write, plan how you can satisfy your audience in some way on every page. Of course all those other elements--plot, theme, dialog, cast of characters, and structure--are important, but the most important task for you is to give the audience what they came to the theater for--satisfaction.

Points to remember

The stage but echoes back the public voice.
The drama’s laws, the drama’s patrons give,
For we that live to please must please to live.

By portraying your hero as being far from "happy and successful," you will intensify the audience's desire to see him struggle toward justice and freedom.

Try to imagine how your Hero, at the beginning of your movie, could be in a state of paralysis, unable to act.

Very near the opening of your screenplay, try to find a way to demonstrate that your Hero possesses a sense of humor.

What are your Hero's values? Are those values shared by the majority of the audience? Take your best shot.

The audience wants the Hero to take on an opponent who is more powerful and successful than the hero. Therefore, to build a really good story, you need to create a backstory that includes the Prior Power characteristic for the Opposing/Attacking Force.

Romantic Comedy and Person-in-Peril genres combine the Bonding Character and the Opposing/Attacking Force into one person. So in these genres, the Bonding Character is also the Antagonist.

Moviegoers want the hero to play for high stakes, some outcome, or ideal, or benefit that they believe is supremely important.

The audience wants the hero to face his or her worst fears and to escape death (literal or figurative) by means of strength of character, persistence, cleverness and courage, not raw strength.

Write against the expectations of the audience, or have the expectation fulfilled but in a totally unexpected way.

Unless you're writing a Cautionary Tale or a Redemption Story, do not let your Hero be motivated by base selfish needs.

 (Some of this material, in an earlier form, appeared as an article in ScreenTalk Magazine)

 

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